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Ramble on, I say.
Okay..someone has to say it: Jay, you're a horrible writer. I know language/literature has been your profession and passion, but your writing is confusing, overloaded, goes off a tangent and is downright tiresome to get through. KISS! Keep it Simple, Stupid. Please stop the parenthesis, hyphens, digressions, etc. It's exhausting. Write about AIDS and your personal life. Stop using literary terms and references to lit theory. Just stop! Talk about what AIDS did to you and means to you. Talk about what you think about other gay HIV pos and neg men. Talk about your health, diet, hope for the future, whatever. Just stop trying to turn this blog into a mini-literature lesson. When I read your bio, I was fascinated. I thought, god, there must be so much in this man that he can share. Talk about yourself, please.
I live in a foodie heaven and am a professionally trained baker and pastry chef. I'm not big on exotic foods or weird preparation methods. I just like a few simple items carefully prepared. Everybody's unique, though, and I hope one day you get to have food pills for dinner ;).
This confirmed foodie doesn't hate on you for a second. :-)
wow
cdn't disagree more with the commenter above. stunning little nuggets,esp. the digressions, the non sequiturs andthe refs to words and works you love. keep working us through the rest of the alphabet.
May 26, 2011